“Ahhhhhhhhhh, I can’t believe I finally get to see Lil
Wayne!” I could feel the excitement in my screeching voice pierce my best
friend’s ears on the other line. We both cheered and screamed at this once in a
life time opportunity. Finally, I was going to see the man who entered my
dreams every night. All of Wayne’s music
overflowed my tiny baby blue Ipod Nano, his posters and cd covers decorated the
bright pink walls of my adolescent room, his music was the only music played on
my Myspace page, his quotes were my only Facebook status, and he was always the
topic of discussion every time I’d talk on the phone to my best friend. We were
constantly in competition over who loved Wayne more. It didn’t seem like a
moment passed where we didn’t profess our love for him. Wayne was everything to
me because he was so talented. I never heard anyone rap like that before it was
clever, witty, and filled with all types of puns. He had such an “I don’t give
a fuck attitude” and I loved it. The more my mom and dad would try to stop me
from listening to him, the more I wanted to rebel. So when I found out one of
my sisters’ friends had an extra ticket to go see Young Money, I was all for it
and I knew I had to look my best. Finally, I was going to go see the one person
who meant everything to me.
I dyed
my hair jet black to go along with my mid-length funky hair cut I’d gotten a
couple days before. I fluffed up my do
with some Farrah Fawcett flips. I decided to spice up my make up with a Marlin
Monroe red hot lipstick. I aligned my lips with a darker red lip liner pencil for
definition and stole my mom’s “Chili Pepper Red” MAC lipstick. For my eyes I
went with dramatic thick black winged eyeliner inspired by Amy Winehouse. My
fit had to be right so I went for a sexy yet hip Rihanna look. I wore my
H&M black and grey leopard pencil skirt. Hitting right below my knees it
hugged my tiny curves in all the right places. I wore my favorite bright purple
halter top. It tied around my neck showing a smidge of my upper back and on the
front in gleaming sequins read “Bebe”. I kept it simple, but chic for my shoes
sliding on my older sister’s black suede wedge heels. And lastly, the previous
week I’d found a vintage Louis Vuitton mini clutch tucked away in the crevices
of my grandmother’s attic. After wiping off the cob webs and dust, the little
purse became the cutest accessory accentuating my outfit to the upmost. It was
trapezoid -shaped, shiny patent leather material, off-white, with golden
handles, and covered in the Louis Vuitton print. The bag was really special to
me because it was my mother’s. I felt like I was her back in her party days,
but I still wanted to add more of my own flavor to it. So I took an old broken
necklace chain and attached it to the handles of the purse giving it an
extension. “There.”, I thought, “ I look good so I feel
good, now I’m ready to see Wayne.”
Hey, Nia.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you construct this tone of teenage-hyper-enthusiasm. Cut needless words, though, like "adolescent," when you say "adolescent room." We already get that fact, because you've done such a good job constructing this tone of teenagehood.
I like too, that you use details that all contribute to the overarching tone of the piece. Nice job.
Wow, all that specific description in the 2nd half really creates a picture. Also gives a cool insight to how much care and time females actually put in to getting ready. You definitely show your feelings & thoughts as well. The way you described things showed how excited you were about the concert. Everything was well said.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this story, you gave a lot of detail and as I read on i could just picture all the descriptions. you broke down every piece of your outfit which I personally liked, being into fashion myself. I thought it was cute because you were excited to see your favorite artist, and i could definitely relate to that.
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